14. Writing assignments

Today I'm going to write about our writing assignment 5, which is absolutely different from all others essays. At althought it provides much more work than other essays, personally I like it the most. First, because I'm used to write these essays at school, second, because argumentation essay is one of the clearest tasks as you know for sure what exactly you should do and what is the purpose of your writing. And as to arguments, I think, it is easy to find arguments for any position, at least you can use sorces, that means you can use other people's thoughts.

As to my draft 1, I think, I should work more on integrating quotes, paraphrasing and summary into my text. To add clear warrants. To make anything clearer to sound more understandable. I also will add some arguments. However, my topic is easy for me, because I have no doubt that my opinion about that is the only true one. That's why I maybe should work a little on the accuracy of using sources as its quite important in this essay. I hope, that essay will be better after all these mistakes being fixed.

13. 18

In just 5 days I will be officially adult and I have very indefinite views on that. First of all, I will have so many rights, and I like it, of course. However, in reality, in our country the laws are not as strict, that's why nothing will change, despite maybe the opportunity to drive a car. Actually, the right to get a driving license is one of the main thing I am looking forward. Maybe because I can't see any other things changing. As to my feelings, I don't notice anything new in my personality. As to other people, I don't think that they will treat me differently because of the fact that I'm 18. What is sad about that, is that my parents, for sure, won't take me seriously as an adult. As to just the way I live, everything will stay the same. I will continue studying, I hope:) I will still live with my family, but on my own. And so on, and so on. However, I try not to think much about sad sides of being 18 year old, like responsibility, and I just wait to be 18 to drive a car and have a birthday party;)